Revised Title:
"Eamonn Holmes, 65, Falls Live on GB News Two Weeks After Hospitalization for Home Collapse"  
Key Adjustments:  

Removed redundant details (e.g., "off his chair," "rushed to hospital") while retaining clarity.  
Streamlined phrasing ("hospitalization for collapse" vs. "rushed to hospital when he collapsed").  
Maintained critical context: age, live incident, and prior health event.
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Revised Title:
"Eamonn Holmes, 65, Falls Live on GB News Two Weeks After Hospitalization for Home Collapse"

Key Adjustments:

  • Removed redundant details (e.g., "off his chair," "rushed to hospital") while retaining clarity.
  • Streamlined phrasing ("hospitalization for collapse" vs. "rushed to hospital when he collapsed").
  • Maintained critical context: age, live incident, and prior health event.

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