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Parkway Drive’s Sydney Opera House Show Ticket Prices Spark Fan Outrage: ‘They Want to Bleed Us Dry’
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Parkway Drive’s Sydney Opera House Show Ticket Prices Spark Fan Outrage: ‘They Want to Bleed Us Dry’

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Parkway Drive Fans Divided Over Sydney Opera House Ticket Prices Fans of Australian metalcore band Parkway Drive are clashing over steep ticket prices for their upcoming “black tie” Sydney Opera House performance on June 9. The Byron Bay band will play a symphonic orchestra-backed show, with tickets ranging from $349 to $489, sparking outrage on […]

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“Aussie Broadcaster Reveals Shock Career Switch to NRL Coaching Bid”

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Matty Johns Opens Up on Coaching Interest Amid Media Crossroads (By Ed Carruthers for Daily Mail Australia | Updated: 11:50 GMT, 10 February 2025) NRL legend and Fox Sports personality Matty Johns has revealed he’s received an approach from an unnamed club about a shock return to coaching. The 53-year-old’s lucrative media contract expires later […]