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Revised Title:
"Video Shows Cher’s Son at Chateau Marmont with Visible Leg Sores During Divorce Proceedings"
Key Adjustments:
- Removed subjective terms like "disturbing," "zombie," and "sweat-stained" for neutrality.
- Simplified actions ("shuffling" → "spotted at").
- Specified "visible leg sores" to clarify observation.
- Added "during divorce proceedings" for context without sensationalism.
"Video Shows Cher’s Son at Chateau Marmont with Visible Leg Sores During Divorce Proceedings"
Cher’s Son Elijah Blue Allman Struggles Amid Addiction and Legal Battles
Title: "Multi-Million-Selling Artist Spotted Incognito Bargain Hunting in LA – Can You Guess Who She Is?"
Reasoning:
- Replaces "multimillion-record-selling" with the concise "Multi-Million-Selling."
- Uses "spotted incognito" to convey "unrecognizable" in a more natural tone.
- Maintains the engaging question format while tightening phrasing (e.g., "bargain hunting" instead of "bargain hunting in LA…").
- Avoids ellipses for a cleaner structure.
Macy Gray Spotted Bargain Shopping in LA: From Grammy Winner to Low-Key Shopper [Image: Macy Gray browsing an outdoor clothing stall in a casual hoodie and cutoff sweats, caption: Macy Gray, unrecognizable in a laid-back outfit while shopping on Melrose Avenue.] Multimillion-selling artist Macy Gray turned heads this week during a low-key shopping trip in […]