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Revised Title:
"Jesinta Franklin Showcases Baby Bump in Silk Gown at Melbourne Film Festival Ahead of Third Child’s Arrival"
Key Adjustments:
- Removed "AFL WAG" to streamline and modernize the title.
- Replaced "debuts her blossoming" with "showcases" for conciseness.
- Shortened "Melbourne International Film Festival" to "Melbourne Film Festival" (common shorthand in media).
- Simplified "ahead of welcoming third child" to "ahead of third child’s arrival" for clarity.
This version maintains the core details while enhancing readability and brevity.
"Jesinta Franklin Showcases Baby Bump in Silk Gown at Melbourne Film Festival Ahead of Third Child’s Arrival"
Jesinta Franklin Debuts Baby Bump at Melbourne Film Festival By Marta Jary [Image: Jesinta Franklin in a pale blue silk gown at the event. Caption: Jesinta Franklin showcased her baby bump at the Melbourne International Film Festival.] AFL WAG Jesinta Franklin, 33, revealed her growing baby bump for the first time at the Melbourne International […]
Rewritten Title:
"Chris Hughes Rejects Celebs Go Dating Offer After Bosses Pursue Him Over ‘Close Relationship’ with ‘Soulmate’ JoJo Siwa on CBB"
Key Adjustments:
- Replaced "turns down" with "rejects" for conciseness.
- Added "offer" for clarity.
- Used "pursue" instead of "tried to sign up" to streamline phrasing.
- Retained quotes around close relationship and soulmate as in the original.
- Abbreviated Celebrity Big Brother to CBB (common shorthand).
- Maintained the causal link between the show’s interest and his relationship with JoJo Siwa.
"Chris Hughes Rejects Celebs Go Dating Offer After Bosses Pursue Him Over ‘Close Relationship’ with ‘Soulmate’ JoJo Siwa on CBB"
Chris Hughes Declines ‘Celebs Go Dating’ Offer Amid Christine McGuinness Exit Chris Hughes, 32, has turned down an offer to join the latest season of Celebs Go Dating as a replacement for Christine McGuinness, who abruptly left the show after just two weeks of filming. The Celebrity Big Brother alum, known for his close bond […]