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Revised Title:
Colin Hay of Men At Work Honors Legendary Music Producer Following Sudden Death
Key Adjustments:

Simplified "lead singer" to "of Men At Work" for conciseness.
Replaced "pays tribute to" with "honors" for variety.
Changed "shock death" to "sudden death" to maintain professionalism while retaining urgency.
Removed redundant phrasing to ensure clarity and brevity.

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Revised Title:
Colin Hay of Men At Work Honors Legendary Music Producer Following Sudden Death

Key Adjustments:

Simplified "lead singer" to "of Men At Work" for conciseness.

Replaced "pays tribute to" with "honors" for variety.

Changed "shock death" to "sudden death" to maintain professionalism while retaining urgency.

Removed redundant phrasing to ensure clarity and brevity.

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Men At Work’s Colin Hay Honors Late Producer Peter McIan By Jimmy Briggs | 07:41 BST, 23 April 2025 | Updated: 07:41 BST, 23 April 2025 [Image: Colin Hay performing live] Men At Work frontman Colin Hay, 71, has paid an emotional tribute to music producer Peter McIan following his sudden passing this month. McIan, […]

Chelsea Handler Would Weigh Herself ’15 Times a Day’ to Stay Thin
This version retains the core details (subject, action, purpose) while replacing "used to" with "would" to convey habitual past behavior, ensuring clarity and conciseness without altering the original meaning.

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Chelsea Handler Would Weigh Herself ’15 Times a Day’ to Stay Thin

This version retains the core details (subject, action, purpose) while replacing "used to" with "would" to convey habitual past behavior, ensuring clarity and conciseness without altering the original meaning.

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Chelsea Handler Opens Up About Past Body Image Struggles: “I Weighed Myself 15 Times a Day” By Deirdre Durkan-Simonds | Updated March 4, 2025 Comedian Chelsea Handler, 50, has revealed her intense past struggles with body image, admitting she once weighed herself “15 times a day” to stay thin. During a candid conversation on The […]